Write the fantasy novel readers lose sleep over—
and immediately need their best friend to read.

The 3 storytelling shifts you can start using TODAY to make your fantasy novel unputdownable.

Without chasing trends, writing to market, or sacrificing the story YOU want to tell.

I WANT READERS OBSESSED [$37]

These 3 easy-peasy storytelling shifts will help you:

Write characters readers get ridiculously attached to and genuinely miss when the book ends.
Make readers NEED to know what happens next so closing the book suddenly feels impossible.
Pull readers so completely into your fantasy world they forget they're reading words on a page.
Make the kiss, betrayal, death, reveal, and final battle hit exactly as hard as it does in your head.
Create a book that gets reviews saying "I couldn't put it down."

MAKE MY BOOK UNPUTDOWNABLE [$37]

I Wish Someone Had Taught Me This Before I Wrote 30+ Fantasy Novels

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Here's the truth…

I spent 20 years writing and rewriting fantasy novels. Then 3 years querying 1,783 literary agents trying to traditionally publish them.

And every rejection kept saying:

"I'm just not connecting with the story."

I thought if I kept writing, kept practicing, and told the stories I wanted to tell, eventually I'd write the next Harry Potter.

What I didn't realize?

I knew how I felt about my story. I hadn't learned how to make the READER feel it.

So I became obsessed with what makes readers care, get curious, and CONNECT.

And FINALLY…

My books started getting reviews like:

That's not because I wrote more.

It's because I learned how to make the READER feel the story too.

I WANT REVIEWS LIKE THIS [$37]

Who Is This For?

Fantasy writers who have rewritten Chapter One approximately 47 times because something still doesn't feel right.
Who can build an entire magic system, character backstory, royal bloodline, and map… but aren't as sure how to make readers CARE about the people living in it.
Who get halfway through their draft and suddenly start questioning the plot, changing direction, or wondering if the whole freaking story is actually working.
Who are writing their first fantasy novel—or their tenth— and want readers obsessed enough to keep turning pages, lose sleep, and immediately shove the book at their best friend.
Who are ready to learn from a fantasy author who spent 20 years figuring out how to make readers connect with a story— so they don't freaking have to.

YEP, THIS IS FOR ME [$37]

What's inside?

💜The Reader Obsession Principle™

Learn the specific shifts I use to make readers emotionally invest in a character, so the moments that matter later—betrayals, deaths, romances, sacrifices—actually freaking HIT.

📖The Page-Turn Formula™

Learn how to plant unanswered questions throughout your story that readers NEED answers to, so "one more chapter" turns into "crap, why is it 2:57 AM?"

✨The Professional Author Effect™

Spot the tiny sentence and dialogue choices that can make a story feel "off"—and learn how to make your writing feel more immersive, polished, and professional.

SHOW ME HOW TO MAKE THEM CARE [$37]

Your reader isn't waiting until Chapter Five to care. They're putting the book down.

Meanwhile, you're rewriting Chapter One. Again. Tweaking the plot. Again. Wondering what the freaking story is missing.

Hook Your Fantasy Reader™ teaches you the 3 storytelling shifts that make readers care, get curious, and keep reading.

Give them a reason to stay from Chapter One.

Regular Price: $97

Today's Price: $37

YES! I WANT READERS HOOKED [$37] →

Well, Hi! 👋

I'm Abby.

I've been writing fantasy novels since 2006—including 30+ manuscripts and querying 1,783 literary agents trying to traditionally publish them.

Then in 2021, I stopped just writing more and became obsessed with figuring out why I kept hearing:

"I'm just not connecting with the story."

I learned what makes readers care, get curious, and keep reading. And it completely changed the way I write.

Today, I have 5 published fantasy novels with reviews like:

Hook Your Fantasy Reader™ is me handing you the storytelling shifts I wish someone had handed me 20 years ago.

TEACH ME THE 3 SHIFTS [$37] →

Amazon review: Love the style of this book

If you KNOW your fantasy story could be incredible, but it still doesn't FEEL the way you want it to, something's missing. 👀

(And it's not another aimless rewrite, I promise.)

Get inside, and I'll show you how to make your story hit the way you've always imagined.

MAKE MY STORY HIT THE WAY I IMAGINE [$37]

Write the fantasy novel readers lose sleep over—and immediately need their best friend to read.